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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

This story reminded me of Nietzsche’s eternal recurrence idea of being trapped in a loop until you choose to break free. Thank you for sharing.

I also have a personal question I wanted to ask, I left it inbox, when you have time please check it out.

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

Awww sweet but poignant imaginings- I enjoyed this

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Pages After Dark's avatar

2nd person POV is kinda rare and you pulled it off! This was a great read.

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Lauren Salas's avatar

Thanks! Still a little scared of being chased by an angry mob when I dip into 2nd person, so I don't do it often.

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Jared “Darkwing Duck” Lambert's avatar

Never heard of this angel. Is it one you created?

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Lauren Salas's avatar

Yeah, she's just Jess' guardian angel that was created for the story.

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Jared “Darkwing Duck” Lambert's avatar

Cool! Does her angel name have a meaning?

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