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Aug 22Liked by Lauren Salas

Omg this was so creepy! In a good way. Also loved the twist near the beginning, that it looks like they're obsessed with Julie, but it's actually the other way around. Oh man I hope Jason (his name?) manages to escape his curse with his wrist intact...Yikes!

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Another really great story, Lauren and congratulations again on your win 👍🏼

Evil Dead II is a stone cold classic 😁

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Very clever concept. Great narrative voice as well. Love how you make the reader get on board so quickly and accept that any of this is possible. Really enjoyed the read ❤️

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Love this. Congrats on winning the contest. Great writing. Awesome concept. 👁️👁️

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Nov 28, 2023·edited Nov 28, 2023Liked by Lauren Salas

Whoa! So dark, creepy. Congrats on winning the Wicked Writing Contest!

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Oh man. The combination of dark humor and horror in this is so so good. I enjoyed the premise, and I absolutely love the cliffhanger ending. Great job, and congratulations!

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Glad you liked it! Mixing humor and horror's one of my favorite things to do; probably stems from the fact that Evil Dead II and Drag Me to Hell are two of my favorite movies.

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