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Kathy Enriquez-Nguyen's avatar

Literally bite-sized fiction. That was hot. Love it!!!

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David B. Corder's avatar

Loved the diction you used for this story. Never heard of chiropteran but I'm going to put it in my author's quiver!

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Lauren Salas's avatar

Thanks! 'Chiropteran' is a great word to have in your back pocket for anything bat-related.

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Sieran Lane's avatar

Omg!! Loved how precise your word choices were. Short and sweet! (Or rather, sharp and sweet, LOL). The guy was a Too Stupid to Live character, lmao.

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Nick Winney's avatar

im never going to the chiropractor again... hes always talking about the benefits of hanging upside down... now i know why!

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