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Pages After Dark's avatar

The imagery in this was really good! Your writing makes the story more effective. Keep writing, fellow horror writer!

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K.M. Bennett's avatar

So disturbing and sad. The part that really got me was him not breaking the illusion for his family's sake. Someone his mom can hug without flinching. Oh my heart! 🥺

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

Marvellous & nighmarish

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Lauren Salas's avatar

That's how I know I'm doing it right.

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Artemis's avatar

Horrifying and unique. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Jared Michael's avatar

I love stories where fairies are proper evil and this is a good one!

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Lauren Salas's avatar

Right? There's nothing fair about the Fair Folk.

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